E23
Carnival
There was a girl named Zaki. Zaki is a girl aged 13 who loves going to the carnival! That’s her favourite hobby. She has been to every carnival in the world, well most of the carnivals. She always goes to carnivals with her friends, Ashley and Jessica.
Today, they are going to another carnival! Zaki asked, ‘Jess, Ash! How about we go to an abandoned carnival? After all, we love horror stuff!’ Ashley then replied, ‘But it’s creepy, I don’t think we should go there... What would happen if we went missing?!’ Jessica replied to Ashley, ’Oh Ashley don’t be such a scaredy cat! You're overreacting. How bad can it possibly be?’ Ashley replied with a glum face and a sigh, ‘I guess you're right...’
They went to the creepy abandoned carnival; Ashley was shaking even though Jessica and Zaki were next to her comforting her. Zaki then said, ‘This is the place! Let’s go in!’ Jessica replied with a smile on her face, ‘Yes! Oh I can already tell this is already going to be so fun!’ Ashley replied with a worried face, ‘Oh uh... I don’t know about “fun” ...’ Jessica replied, ‘Oh don’t be such a loser! This is going to be great! Besides, it’s not like any killer is going to pop out and kill us.’ Jessica mocked, ‘That’s what I’m afraid of...’ Ashley replied with a whisper.
They played so long in the carnival and everything seemed to be absolutely fine. All was well. Or was it?
Ashley said, ‘Jess, this isn’t too bad after all! Zaki, you're a genius! How wise of you to think of some adventurous places like this! Oh, I love it here!’ Zaki replied with happiness, ‘Thank you Ash! And I totally agree. I’m a genius!’ Jessica said, ‘Hold on a second, I have to go to the bathroom, can you guys wait for me outside the bathroom?’ Zaki and Ashley replied, ‘Sure Jess.’
So they waited for Jessica for a while, but then they heard a strange voice. Zaki asked, ‘Are you hearing what I’m hearing?’ Ashley replied to Zaki with a worried look on her face, ‘Y-yes, is that...h-h-humming...?’ Zaki then whispered to Ashley, ‘Run for our lives!’ They ran to the bathroom to hide. Jessica heard voices of breathing heavily and asked, ‘Ash? Zaki? Is that you?’ Zaki and Ashley both said, ‘Yes! And I think there is a killer nearby!’ They all hid in the same bathroom stall and heard footsteps outside, they weren't ready for what would happen next.
Zaki, the smart girl, well maybe she wasn’t too smart after all, thought of an idea. Then she told Ashley and Jessica about how to get out of here. That was a great plan they all agreed. Zaki told Ashley to distract the killer, she was also a member of the athletic team, so the killer couldn’t run faster than Ashley after all. Zaki told Jessica to find the exit, don’t worry, she won’t get lost. While they were doing that, Zaki went looking for weapons to murder the killer.
Ashley then distracted the killer, while distracting the killer, she thought to herself, I never knew the killer was a clown! Kind of funny to be honest! But just then, the killer threw a knife at her, the killer clown’s aim was good. Ashley then thought, ‘OH MY!’ Jessica then looked behind, seeing Ashley running very fast and of course saw the killer clown throwing knives at her. Jessica later shouted, ‘Don’t you dare hurt my dear friends!’ The clown replied in a creepy voice, ‘Only if you can stop me from it!’ Jessica then showed what she got and she threw rocks at the killer clown. Jessica’s aim was excellent too. She threw the rock right at the killer clown’s head! The killer clown’s head was bleeding so much, he had to recover, he slumped by the Merry-Go-Round.
Just before Zaki arrived with the weapon. She was shocked by how they defeated the killer! Zaki said in shock, ‘Oh my...I’m so proud of you guys!’ Jessica replied with full happiness in her heart, ‘Thank you, Zaki!’ Ashley then said, ‘Speak less! We have to call the police to arrest this crazy person before he gets up.’
After calling the police, the girls were safe and sound. Zaki then asked, ‘Hey Ash and Jess, what do you say about a sleepover at my house?’ Ashley and Jessica replied, ‘Yes! We love a sleepover!’
At the sleepover, Jessica, Ashley and Zaki watched Netflix and played all day. At night, they had a pillow fight. After a while, it was time to sleep. But they couldn't seem to sleep so they talked for a bit. Ashley asked Zaki, ‘Hey Zaki? Not to be mean, but why didn’t we just call the police when we were at the carnival?’ Zaki replied, ‘Oh right! I guess I’m not a genius after all!’ Jessica then said, ‘Well the situation is over now, that’s the best part of this moment.’ Zaki and Ashley both agreed. Zaki added, ‘We’re best friends, and nothing will tear us apart!’
Ashley and Jessica laughed, ‘Haha! Oh Zaki, we are glad to have a friend like you.’ That was the most lovely and wonderful message they have ever heard.
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